>>4662 (OP)
This is kinda late, took some time for me to get the chance to read lol
I finished the first ten chapters that you linked, and I thought they were cute. I like how you include the behaviors of the characters' species into their own behaviors, you make it seem more natural and not unrealistic like "This character turned into a cat, and now they keep chasing laser pointers!", for example the scene where the psychologist is pressing Lyla with a bunch of questions and she freezes like a possum playing dead, I thought that was cool. I also liked how Kellie is looking at the bright side of having turned into a raccoon, it's such a common trope in media where a character transforms into something that it's seen as only a negative. It's nice to see a character actually look at the positives of their new body. Though I must admit, if I were in that facility after turning into an anthro, I would find her sooooo annoying lol... The switching perspectives is also neat, kinda cool to still have a human perspective in an anthro-centric book
Anyways I drew this fanart of Lyla, I hope I drew her well :P
I may continue past the first ten chapters if I happen to find the time lol
